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I cried for you...
Inside someone else's arms
And he knew, I'm sure of that

Naked
He hugged me
Naked
And kept kissing me
While he could listen
To my heart beating
Your name's rhythm

He made sure to
"Fix me up!", I screamed
He was there
You weren't
And i was crying harder
And he was holding me tighter

And then...
...a surprise...

"At times, i feel nothing", I said
"I will help you find the reason", he answered
And hugged me once again...
...Choosing what you couldn't.
©2006-2009 ~Mortuelle
:iconmortuelle:

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no changes, straight from my journal where i wrote this comment:

Unexpected...

...And i'm wondering, was it really? I mean really?

What's love? Accepting the fact that you are loved less but still deciding to stay?

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:iconlovespoon:
That's pretty intense. This could be an unfulfilled love poem. You love two guys one less than the other, but the one you love less is closer.

The second stanza pretty is great.

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:iconmortuelle:
thank you! :aww:

thanx for the fav too :hug:

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η ζωή είναι παιχνίδι αλλά
έχει μία μόνο πίστα...
:iconalexproject:
don't cry my friend :hug:

--
kafesimdir duvarin .
words by Alessandro Scaparro
:iconmortuelle:
:hug:

crying is good sometimes :nod:

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η ζωή είναι παιχνίδι αλλά
έχει μία μόνο πίστα...
:iconalexproject:
all emotions are good ;)
:hug:

--
kafesimdir duvarin .
words by Alessandro Scaparro
:iconmortuelle:
yeah without them life would be sooo boring...

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η ζωή είναι παιχνίδι αλλά
έχει μία μόνο πίστα...
:iconmortuelle:
:aww: euxaristw :)

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η ζωή είναι παιχνίδι αλλά
έχει μία μόνο πίστα...
:iconalexproject:
sure...

--
kafesimdir duvarin .
words by Alessandro Scaparro
:iconnecrosunderground:
Didn't we already cover this one? :lol:

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If you weren't quite so big, it would be time for Mr. and Mrs. Spank to pay a short, sharp visit to Botty-land.

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